Sunday, February 21, 2010

Mental lassy!

A momenatary shy glance,
And she took up her stance,
She knew he was the one,
The damned son of a gun.

"Tis love at first sight"she thought,
Her eye, he caught;
She winked, he blinked,
And her love story she inked.

He came,one day,sans his stubble,
Easily bursting her happy bubble-
Acne and moles spelling a lifetime of trouble,
Her dreams of a hunk lay in ruins and rubbles.

"We're off", she texted,
The confused guy had been bested,
Another day,another hunk,
And her brains dropped with a clunk!


PS-very very amateur piece of poetry,I agree.But the first one with a structure..chomp chomp chomp!!celebrate for me!!;)

5 comments:

  1. i liked the way u linked winked,blinked & inked..

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  2. not bad.. finally some structure in your life of mayhem...:P

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  3. amateur!?? not at all..nice one..

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  4. no words to describe!!but still - simple loved it!! uve put in great thot behind it along with perfectly rhyming words!!its simply sooperb!!

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